英语初中写作 初中英语作文写作技巧


额,第一段是抄的,其他的都是自创的,谢谢! 1.it is known that after the human infects the Type A H1N1 flu's symptom and cold is similar, the patient will appear has a fever, the cough, wearily, to have a poor appetite and so on. In the prevention aspect, Xu Ruiheng thought that the present stage necessity has not huddled together vaccinates the person influenza vaccine, because prevents the seasonal influenza vaccine to prevent the Type A H1N1 flu and not to have the effect. Correct makes the law forms the good personal hygiene habit, sufficient sleep, attendance in exercise, reduced pressure, enough nutrition; The attendance washes the hands, after particularly has contacted the public goods, must wash the hands first touches own eye, the nose and the mouth again; Sneezes and cough time should use the paper goods to cover the oronasal; The indoor maintains ventilates and so on. 众所周知,人类感染后的类型甲型H1N1禽流感的症状和感冒相似,患者会出现发烧,咳嗽,疲劳,有食欲不振等。



2. It's a short time that 3 years finished.We had to say goodbye to our classmates and teachers. We have stayed together for 3 years. We can't let each other go.We are good friends.It maybe difficult to say goodbye . But we must do that. We have to walk on our own road in the fultrue. We have grown up and we aren't a child anymore. My dear classmates and teachers,you made me happy in this 3 years.You helped me in many ways and I feel very warm.You let me to feel the sunshine of the world.It's very beautiful. It made me get out of many kinds of trouble.Thank you,it's true!Thank you! 短短的3年过去了。



也许,说再见很难 ,但我们必须那样做。





谢谢你们,真的,谢谢你们! 3. Hello,my friends!Ha ha! I'm a middle school's student,I have many hobbies! First,I love play computer games.In fact ,many students love that as well.It's very interesting. I also like playing table tennis and swimming.Because sports is good for our health,isn't it? Oh,I like English best!English is very popular in the world.Most people in the world can speak English!In all of my subjects,English is my favourite,I word very hard in that program!How about you? 你们好,我的朋友们! 我是一个中学生,我有很多爱好哦! 首先,我很喜欢玩电脑游戏。

事实上,许多学生都和我一样爱玩的!它非常有趣! 我也很喜欢打乒乓球和游泳,因为运动对我们的健康有好处,不是吗? 噢,我最喜欢英语!英语在现在这个世界上很普遍。

世界上的大多数人都会说英语! 在我所有的学科中英语是我最喜欢的,我在这方面最努力!你呢?









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第二个:Along with the rapid growth of ...,...has become increasingly important in our daily life.随着...的快速增长,...在日常生活中已经变得越来越重要。

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1.My family 我的家 Hello, everyone, I'm Liu Dongdong. I'm a student. There are three people in my family—my father, mother and I.My father is 40 years old. He is a worker. I think he is a good worker. Because he works very hard. He gets up very early every day and he works for more than 10 hours a day. So he is always busy, he looks very tired when he gets home. He likes reading newspapers. He usually reads it after supper. So he gets lots of news.My mother is 38 years old. She is a worker too. She works in a very small factory. She is not tall and she has two big eyes. She loves me and she is good for me. She always buys some books for me. She wants me to be a top student. She also cares for my diet and life.I' m 15 years old. I wear glasses. I like reading. I always read books after school. I like singing, too. My favorite singer is Jay Chou. His music is very nice. What do you think of him? I also like making friends. If you want to meet me, please write to me.Oh, my parents love me and I love them, too. My family is a happy family.2.My Hometown 我的家乡 In the east of China, there is a small city---Haimen. I was born there. Today, I am telling you about my hometown. Haimen is not far from Shanghai. It's at the mouth of the Changjiang River. Haimen is a modern city. There are lots of high buildings in it. Most of us live in flats. We like to live in flats because we can be close to our friends. In the center of Haimen, there are many shops. You can buy some nice things here. Things in most shops aren't expensive. You can pay a little money and they are yours. My hometown is a beautiful city. On each of the roads, there are some big trees and nice flowers. The roads are also very clean. They make people happy and comfortable. The seasons here are very nice. I like autumn best. It's neither hot nor cold. A poem says “Flyer of summer come to my window to sing, then fly away. And yellow leaves of autumn, which have no songs, just fall there with a sign.” It's very cool.I love Haimen. It's a nice place to live. Welcome to my hometown.3.A Trip To Shanghai 一次去上海的旅行 I took a trip to Shanghai with my mother during the seven-day holiday. It took us more than two hours to drive to Shanghai from my home in Haimen. We stayed in a large hotel on the eighth floor. On the first day, I just stayed in the hotel and rested. On the second day, my brother and I went to Nanjing Road. It's the busiest street in Shanghai. When we got there, there were lots of people. We walked from one shop to another. I bought two T-shirts and two pairs of trousers for the coming summer. The T-shirts and trousers I bought are all white because white is my favourite colour. My brother also bought some clothes. On the third day, my mother took me to Jinjiang Entertainment Centre. It was full of people. I played many kinds of games there. I had a good time. The other days, I went to some other interesting places, such as the Oriental Bright Pearl TV Tower, the Huangpu River and Shanghai International Conference Centre. I didn't forget to do my homework in the evening. I had a full and happy holiday.4.To introduce myself 自我介绍 Hello, everyone! My name is Winnie. I'm a 15 years old girl. I live in the beautiful city of Rizhao. I'm an active, lovely, and clever girl. In the school my favorite subject is math. Perhaps someone thinks it's difficult to study well. But I like it. I believe that if you try your best, everything can be done well. I also like sports very much. Such as, running, volleyball and so on. I'm kind-hearted. If you need help, please come to me.I hope we can be good friends! OK. This is me .A sunny girl.5.The Way to Keep Healthy 保持健康的方法 It's important for us to be healthy all our life. We can't study or work well without healthy body. there're many ways to keep healthy. First of all, we should keep taking exercises every day. We can walk to school instead of taking a bus. After school, we can spend an hour playing ball games. If we live in a high-rise, we can walk upstairs or downstairs. Second, we should have a balanced diet. Finally, we must remember: "Early to bed, early to rise is the way to keep healthy, wealthy and wise." 6.The Importance of Electricity 电的重要性 When you go to work in the morning and find that traffic lights don't work, the traffic jam will certainly happen. A patient needs to be operated on at once. What will happen if the operation cannot be made because of the electricity. Without electricity, we can neither watch TV, listen to the tape, nor chat on line. Electricity is closely related to our daily life. How terrible it would be if there were no electricity! 7.Theres No Story without ...


初中英语作文高分秘诀1. 动笔之前,认真审题 《中考考试说明》指出,书面表达要切中题意。




2. 围绕中心,拟定提纲 书面表达评分原则有四条:(1)内容要点;(2)运用词汇和结构的数量;(3)运用语法结构和词汇的准确性;(4)上下文的连贯性。






3. 语言通顺,表达准确(1) 避免使用汉语式英语,尽量使用自己熟悉的句型。


(2) 多用简单句型,记事、写人一般都不需要复杂的句型。




1) 语态、时态要准确无误。

2) 主谓语要一致,主语的人称和数要和谓语一致。

3) 注意人称代词的宾格形式。

4) 注意冠词用法,例如: He is an honest student.中的an不能写成a。

5) 注意拼写、标点符号和大小写,例如:receive, believe, fourteen, forty, ninth, restaurant等。

标点符号特别注意汉英的不同,例如: 汉语 英语 A. 句号 。

. B. 省略号 …… … C. 顿号 、 无(4) 描写人物时,要生动具体,例如:1) 外表特征:tall, short, fat, thin, strong, weak, ordinary-looking 等。

2) 服饰颜色:red, yellow, blue, white, green, brown, black 等。

3) 内心境界:glad, happy, sad, excited, anxious, interested 等。

4) 感情描写:love, like, hate, feel, laugh, cry, smile, shout 等。

5) 动作描写:come, go, get, have, take, bring, fetch 等。

(5) 上下文要连贯。


同学们应注意下面过渡的用法:1) 表示并列关系的过渡词:and, as well as, or …2) 表示转折关系的过渡词:but, yet, however …3) 表示时间关系的过渡词:first, second, third, and then, finally, after, before, after a few days, at last, at that time, later, in the past, immediately, in the meanwhile, when, while, then, after that …4) 表示空间关系的过渡词:near (to), far (from), in the front of, beside, behind, beyond, above, below, to the right, to the left, on one side, on the other side of, outside …5) 表示比较关系的过渡词:in the same way, just like, just as …6) 表示对照关系的过渡词:but, still, yet, however, on the other hand, in spite of, even though …7) 表示递进关系的过渡词: also, and, then, too, in addition, moreover, again …8) 表示因果关系的过渡词:because, since, then, thus, otherwise, so, therefore ,as a result…9) 表示解释说明的过渡词:for example, in fact, in this case, for, actually …10) 表示强调的过渡词:in fact, indeed, necessarily, certainly, without any doubt, truly, most important …11) 表示目的的过渡词:for this reason, for this purpose, so that, in order that, so as to, in order to, …12) 表示列举的过渡词:for example , such as …13) 表示总结性的过渡词:in conclusion, finally, at last, in brief, as has been stated, in a word, in general, in all, in a word, generally speaking …4. 不会表达,另辟蹊径 中考作文给分是以要点和语言准确度而定,不以文采打分。




(1) 迂回而行 当汉语词义不会用英语表达时,可以想一个与这个汉语词义相似的几种词义。



(2) 小词大用 汉语中有些语意看来很复杂很文雅,但在英语中可用一些常用词表达。

下面这些词可能在你的书面表达中很有用:take, have, get, make, come, go, do, see, show, happy, nice, kind, help 等。

(3) 借花献佛 有时书面表达中需要的单词或词组或许在试卷中的其他地方出现。



Xian Xinghai Xian Xinghai (June 13, 1905 – October 30, 1945) (Chinese: 冼星海; pinyin: Xiǎn Xīnghăi) was a Chinese composer. He is best known for his Yellow River Cantata, upon which was based the Yellow River Concerto for piano and orchestra (arranged by Yin Chengzong). Born in Panyu (Chinese: 番禺; Pinyin: Panyu) into a family of a poor sailor, Xian started learning clarinet in 1918 at the YMCA charity school attached to the Lingnan University. In 1926, he joined the National Music Institute at Beijing University to study music. In 1928, he entered Shanghai National Music Conservatory to study violin and piano, and in the same year, he published his well-known essay, The Universal Music. In 1929, Xian went to Paris and, in 1931, he was admitted to the Paris Conservatory to study composition. While there he studied both with Vincent D'Indy and Paul Dukas. During this period, he composed Wind, Song of a Wanderer, Violin Sonata in D Minor, and other works. Xian returned to China in 1935. During the Sino-Japanese War (1937-1945), Xian composed vocal works that encouraged and motivated the people to fight the Japanese invaders, and the works included Saving the Nation, Non-Resistance the Only Fear, Song of Guerrillas, The Roads Are Opened by Us, The Vast Siberia, Children of the Motherland, Go to the Homefront of the Enemy, On the Taihang Mountains as well as others. In 1938, he assumed the position of dean in the Department of Music at Lu Xun Institute of Arts in Yan'an. In his spare time, he composed the famous Yellow River Cantata and Production Cantata. In 1940, Xian went to the Soviet Union to compose for the documentary film Yan'an And the Eighth Route Army. Before departure, Mao Zedong invited him to dinner. In 1941, the German invasion of the Soviet Union started and disrupted his composition. He attempted to go back to China by the way of Xinjiang, but the local anti-communist warlord, Sheng Shicai, blocked the way, and Xian got stranded in Alma Ata, Kazakhstan, and it was here that Xian composed symphonies Liberation of the Nation and Sacred War, the suite Red All Over the River and Chinese Rhapsody for winds and strings. He developed pulmonary tuberculosis due to long-time overwork and malnutrition. After the war, Xian went back to Moscow for medical treatment, but he was not completely cured, and he died in October of 1945 in the hospital in the Moscow Kremlin at the age of 40. Xian composed over 300 works. In addition, he also published 35 papers, including Nie Er--the Creator of New Chinese Music and On the National Styles of Chinese Music. His influence in Chinese music won him the title People's Composer. During the Cultural Revolution (1966-1976) when all Western art was forbidden in China, the pianist Yin Chengzong arranged the Yellow River Cantata into a concerto for piano and orchestra, the Yellow River Concerto (1969). After China opened its door to the world in late 1970s, Yin planned to resume the performance of the concerto. There was a debate whether the melody of The East Is Red, which Yin had merged into the concerto, should be removed. At the end, it was decided that the work itself was a cultural legacy of the time when it was created, and the melody reminds listeners of that period and creates a unique sense of history. So the work remains intact as it was originally arranged. Beginning in the 1970s, the Yellow River Concerto has been heard in the West, often performed by Yin Chengzong himself.



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关键词:词不离句、例文导析、审题、技巧、总结 做为一门语言,英语最大的功效就是交际,而它的交际功能体现在口头表达和书面表达两方面。




那么怎样训练初中生写好英语作文呢?我认为可以从以下几个方面入手:一、词不离句 日积月累 文章是由句子组成的,而句子是由词组成的,如果学生掌握了造句的技巧,把句子组成短文,写作的难度就会降低了。


比如每完成一新课的教学就让学生用新单词口头造句,熟悉新单词的词性及用法,如学习teach--I teach you English./He teaches us maths. 课后再让学生把Useful expressions每个造两个句子写在作业本上,这样日积月累、熟能生巧,学生不仅巩固了所学词汇,掌握了它们的用法,也对英汉句子结构的差异有所感悟和了解,这就为写作打下了坚实的基础。

二、口头领先 活跃思维 写作有持续性的特点,要多练才能生巧,可师生的时间都有限,怎么解决这一问题?群口作文无疑是不错的选择。




如初一上学期学习对人物的介绍,我让一个学生站起来,让大家自由发问以了解她/他的基本情况,如“How old are you? How tall are you? What's your favourite colour? What's your favourite food? Do you like sports? What do you often do after class? What do you often do on Saturday and on Sunday? ”我把这些基本信息板书在黑板左侧,再让大家以“My Best Friend”为题对此学生进行描述,先让学生分四人小组讨论我们所学的哪些句子能用上,再找部分学生每人说一句,把大家所说组织成短文板书在黑板上,最后在用词、句式、语法等方面加以指导,周末让学生描写自己的好友时,他们就驾轻就熟了。

再如初一下学期学习有关节日的话题时,我给出一个题目“My Favourite Festival”,围绕这个题目我给出四个节日,如:the Spring Festival,Christmas,the Children's Day,the Mid-autumn Day ,让四个大组每组讨论描述其中的一个节日,还是采用四人小组合作学习法,然后要求他们在课后写成短文,最后张贴在“Writing Guard”,让他们互相学习借鉴。


如Lesson 49 of Book 1学习季节的描述时,我展示winter 和 spring 的图片,从问天气入手,引导学生尝试描述这两幅图,描述的过程中教学生学习月份的单词,最后要求学生把刚才所说的串成短文。

eg. winter Now it's winter .There are three months in winter. They are December, January and February. The weather in winter is cold and snowy. We like winter because we can play with snow and make snowmen. The Spring Festival is in winter. We can have fun.这样让一个、多个或全班学生参与口头表达一个内容,采用合作学习法,发动学生集思广义,激发学生的参与意识和创造意识,即训练了学生的听说能力,又活跃了学生的写作思维,增强了他们的写作兴趣,培养了他们的写作信心。

三、例文导析 心领神会 请大家回忆一下,我们小时候初学写语文作文时,是不是一个模仿的过程?老师告知我们:多读多练,就可提高。





四、指导审题 掌握技巧 除了让学生坚持写作练习,训练学生养成好的写...









英语的作文一定要有个结尾,不要不明不白的就收笔了,要注意加个结尾,如果是发表自己意见的就加类似于“That is my ideas,how about you”之类的,若果是写事的,就加个祈使句吧。





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